incredible!

the animation and music are both perfect! I like the character design and voices as well. this is one of the best!

crazy

I'm gonna go buy it right now! =D

well done! easily deserves the top 5

I don't think it's missing anything; perfect all the way through. Adding more would ruin the mood.
5/5, 10/10

brilliant

Absolutely amazing especially since its your first submission!

I really like pieces like this that create an instant story. The perspective and lighting I feel are a little off though. Perhaps if you were to tone down the exposure a bit and adjust the angle of the girl, it would improve the depth. The perspective is very close to the ground looking up, but the girl is drawn from a slightly top down view. Other than those things, good work!

This has some nice shading and details, but I think a background would really add to it, even one with minimal detail. There's something missing from the overall piece when it's just a gradient behind the character.